The Eyes That Stopped Her
Lagos sun that day no even get mercy. The heat was sitting on people’s skin like it had personal grudges. Inside the small art gallery in Victoria Island, AC was trying its best but still losing the fight.
Teniola stood near a wall of framed portraits, pretending she understood art more than she actually did. Truth be told, she only came because her friend had insisted. “Just come, network small, you never can tell,” Chioma had said before disappearing to answer a call outside.
Teniola adjusted her simple black dress, holding her tote bag like it was her only anchor in that space full of people that looked too confident for her liking. She was already planning her exit in her head.
That was when she felt it.
Not noise. Not touch.
Something like being watched too directly.
She turned slightly.
And saw him.
He was standing near the corner of the room with a camera hanging loosely on his neck. Not the loud type, not the type that tries too hard. Just calm. Almost too calm for Lagos.
But it wasn’t even his presence that held her.
It was his eyes.
Teniola froze without warning.
Like her body recognized something her mind refused to accept.
The man lifted his camera slowly, not rushing, like he had already decided what he was going to capture. Before she could even react properly, click.
He took her picture.
Just like that.
No permission. No apology. No small talk first.
Teniola blinked. “Excuse me… why you snap me like that?”
He lowered the camera slightly, studying her like she was the one interrupting something important.
“I didn’t snap you,” he said softly. “I captured you.”
She frowned. “Is there a difference?”
A small smile touched his face, faint but real. “Big difference.”
Silence hung between them for a second.
Then he added, “You didn’t move. That’s rare.”
Teniola almost laughed but didn’t. “Maybe I was just confused.”
“Or maybe you were remembering something.”
That line hit her weirdly.
She didn’t know why.
Chioma’s voice suddenly echoed in her head from earlier. “If something feel off, just leave am. Lagos no dey explain itself.”
But Teniola didn’t leave.
She should have.
Instead, she found herself walking closer.
“What’s your name?” she asked.
“Kola,” he replied. Then after a pause, “And you?”
“Teniola.”
The moment she said her name, something shifted in his expression. Just for a split second. Like a glitch in a calm face.
But it disappeared fast.
Too fast for her to be sure.
“You’re an interior designer, right?” he asked.
Teniola blinked. “How you know that?”
He shrugged lightly. “Your eyes. They look like someone who arranges broken things until they look fine again.”
That statement made her uncomfortable in a way she couldn’t explain.
Before she could respond, Chioma returned, cutting into the moment.
“Oh wow, you already found company,” Chioma said, eyes scanning Kola from head to toe like a protective alarm system.
Teniola forced a small smile. “We just dey talk.”
Kola nodded politely. “Nice meeting you.”
Chioma didn’t smile back. “Same.”
Then she pulled Teniola slightly aside. “You sure about this guy?”
Teniola glanced back.
Kola was still looking at her.
Not Chioma.
Her.
Chioma lowered her voice. “Something about him no just sit well with me.”
Teniola swallowed. “He’s just a photographer.”
“Photographer wey dey look you like person wey don see you before?”
That question sat inside Teniola’s chest longer than expected.
But she ignored it.
Because she didn’t have an answer.
Later that evening, after she got home to her small Lekki apartment, Teniola kicked off her shoes and dropped her bag on the couch. Lagos traffic had drained her bones.
She was about to pour water when her phone buzzed.
Unknown number.
She hesitated before opening it.
A message came in.
“You still remember me, right?”
Her heart paused.
She stared at the screen.
Then another message came in immediately.
“I didn’t expect you to forget my eyes.”
Teniola slowly sat down.
Her fingers went cold for no clear reason.
She opened the message again, like reading it twice could change the meaning.
But it didn’t.
Her mind started running faster than her thoughts could control.
Who is this person?
How did he get her number?
And why did her chest feel like it already knew the answer… but refused to say it out loud?
She typed slowly.
“Who is this?”
Three dots appeared almost instantly.
Typing.
Stopping.
Typing again.
Then finally:
“You really don’t remember… Teni.”
Teniola’s breath caught.
Nobody calls her that.
Nobody except…
Her phone slipped slightly from her hand.
And just as she was about to reply again, another message dropped.
This one was worse.
It had a photo.
She opened it.
And saw herself.
Standing somewhere that didn’t look like now. Older photo. Different hair. Same face.
But what shook her most wasn’t even her.
It was the person standing beside her in that picture.
Kola.
Smiling.
Like they belonged in the same memory.
Teniola stood up so fast her chair almost fell.
“No… this is not possible,” she whispered.
Her phone buzzed again.
One last message.
“You looked at my eyes that year too. You just chose to forget what you saw.”
The room suddenly felt smaller.
Too quiet.
Too tight.
And somewhere in her chest, something she buried long ago… shifted.
Like it was waking up.
And then the phone rang.
Unknown number calling.
Her hand hovered over it.
Ringing.
Ringing.
Ringing.
She answered.
And before she could say anything…
A familiar voice came through, calm, low, almost too close.
“Teniola… don’t act like you don’t know me.”
Her lips parted.
No words came out.
And then he said the line that made her knees weaken slightly.
“I’ve been looking at your eyes for years.”
The line went silent for a second.
Then he added quietly,
“Now it’s your turn to remember what your eyes did that night.”
Call still ongoing…
But she couldn’t breathe properly anymore.
And somewhere deep inside her memory… something started cracking open.
Slow.
Dangerous.
Real.
To be continued…

1 Comment
I love this story. Where is the next one